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Meeting in secret,
Known just as friends,
If they found out,
It’d be forced to end .

Warm and gentle lips,
Hued the softest pink,
Joined in a simple kiss,
Our hearts become a link.

I smile at you,
And you back at me,
What would we do,
If someone were to see.

You’re the only star,
That is in my sight,
No matter how far,
You’ll always be my light.

Our love is wrong,
According to our peers,
I’ll reveal in this song,
For everyone to hear.

Just let us be,
For you aren’t being just,
To set us free,
Without looks of disgust.

Til that day,
When others will endure,
We’ll sit and wait,
For you to be more mature.

So we’ll meet alone,
Every mark hidden,
Never to be known,
For our love is forbidden.
©2006-2009 ~Kiaba-Stalker17
:iconkiaba-stalker17:

Author's Comments

I hope I was able to convey my emotions well. I'm really hoping that all my emotion went into this one. (this one's the one Mrs. Pruess really really liked) This poem is to my beautiful Kit. Your love is everything to me...

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:iconuesugi:
thats a great poem..........

but love shouldnt ever be hidden!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:hug: fantastic work!

--
Blood hungry, cannibalistic unfit family ties,
In a series of knocks,
To the young girl's head side...

:fork:

I am a Coheed and Cambria addict. Run. Now. =D
:iconalextnt24:
Great Poem!!!!, I loved that, It's been
a while I hadn't seen such a deep poem!
I identify myself with it so much!!
Don't ever give up on your love, I have
been on those roads to and as long as
you believe, it will be all right :wave:

"Everything will be alright. Be strong. Believe"
:iconkiaba-stalker17:
It's because it's 'immoral'. everyone in my school is a homophobe.

--
'My Knight in shining armor is a goofball in aluminum foil, but he saved me all the same...'
:iconkiaba-stalker17:
Thanks for your support. We'll never give up.

--
'My Knight in shining armor is a goofball in aluminum foil, but he saved me all the same...'
:iconsongwriter09:
This is superb. :+fav: srry i've been lazy with my comments anymore, it's just your poems are so good anymore, that i can't find anything else to say =P

--
I so heart HARRY POTTER! Weasley is our King....<---- Ah good times *_*



Avatars by: Falln-avatars
:iconfreai:
I said I'd comment, so I am! ^^ It's absolutly beautiful Sa-sa. Awesome job! :clap:

(And as promised)

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(Just to show how much I luved it! ^-^)

--
“Malik... Marik... you're scaring the heterosexuals...”
-
Yamis are protective. It comes with the job. Supernatural powers, immortality, a Millennium Item, and your very own super-cute hikari, all yours to hold, protect, and have great sex with -Bakura
:iconkurisutaru-kitsune:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! I love it, my little Neko. :glomp: :cuddle: :+fav: of course. ^^

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There’s only now, there’s only here.
Give in to love or live in fear
No other path, no other way
No day but today. - RENT
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Live today as if you'll die tomorrow,
But dream as though you'll live forever. - Ebba
:iconuesugi:
:hug: mine too, but I still go around and kiss guys ;-)

--
Blood hungry, cannibalistic unfit family ties,
In a series of knocks,
To the young girl's head side...

:fork:

I am a Coheed and Cambria addict. Run. Now. =D
:iconinuchan409:
I love this poem...you shouldn't have to hide from people. I hate when that happens...oh the things a father shall never know!haha...homophobes are dumb...I hate them so...so many in my school. I'm sad for my ex...she can't tell her parents anything...she'll be kicked out of her house. What I really hate about my school is that alot of people keep saying that they're bi when they're not so it makes coming-out even harder 'cause nobody believes you. I'm rambling now...I have a tendancy to do that...^^; :clap: love the poem so much!

--
"Fake sex is better than no sex"~Spectre
:iconpresentdayromeo:
Very beatiful poem..... I'm sort of in the same placde as you are in writing this......sort of..... I love a Goddess.......but she only likes me as a friend......and im taking it really hard.

But the worst part is that she doesnt even have a clue as to what extent that i love her, ya know?

:heartbreaker:

--
Love Transends All Bounderies: Life Death Time and Distance

He is not a lover who does who does not love forever. ~Euripides~
:blackrose: :blackrose:

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